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Author: WilltheGreat
Posted: November 17, 2009 (02:21 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I didn't like this review. First thing I noticed were some spelling and punctuation errors. I'd suggest running this through a spellcheck (I think Firefox has one built-in if you use it), for starters. On a similar note, if a number is less than three digits just type it out, i.e. three instead of 3, only use numerals if the number is 100 or greater. These might seem like nitpicks, even minor stylistic pointers like these go a long way to making your review look polished.
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Author: randxian
Posted: November 21, 2009 (07:50 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I think Zipp hit the nail on the head in this ROTW critique - This reads like a first or an early attempt at reviewing.
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Author: Xyandar
Posted: November 28, 2009 (10:57 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I thank the both of you for giving me some feedback on my review. I agree I could have improved my review a bit and made it more longer and better detailed, and I am planning to do a better job in the near future. I have over 60 Xbox 360 games and I usually purchase the most anticipated games such as Call of Duty, Rock Band, Assassins Creed, and more. I will try to become a 'usual' with Honestgamers by reading other reviews and leaving my own feedback as well as adding some new reviews for the new games I have and the older games that may not have been mentioned :)
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Author: randxian
Posted: November 29, 2009 (08:17 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
It's not so much about making it longer and more detailed; it's more about making it more focused. In other words, zoom in on what's most important.
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