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Author: wolfqueen001
Posted: November 01, 2009 (12:43 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Hey; good job on your first review. I'll say that you seem to convey everything about the game that needs to be said, which is good. I actually like the specific examples you used such as describing the many ways to die or explaining how certain monsters attack. That's interesting..
[Eating EmP's brain] probably isn't a good idea. I mean... He's British, which means his brain's wired for PAL and your eyes are NTSC. - Will |
Author: jiggs
Posted: November 01, 2009 (08:44 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
thank you so much for the feedback! i will work on correcting those you mentioned. i do have a tendency to overdo it sometimes because when i submitted it..i didn't put all that html crap on there except for a few words. about 8 hrs after posting it i spent the whole morning tacking things on mainly the html and also trying to jig-saw puzzle some new sentences i wrote this morning to fit in with the current one thinking i may have missed out on some detail. i guess i'm trying to do too much when it really isn't necessary which you keenly picked up on. thanks for the heads up. after posting my first review, i feel an addictive rush going. i am gonna try it again.
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Author: wolfqueen001
Posted: November 01, 2009 (10:53 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
No problem. =D I'm glad this helped and that you're excited to write more. It's always great to see new contributors. I hope you can make this a regular thing for yourself.
[Eating EmP's brain] probably isn't a good idea. I mean... He's British, which means his brain's wired for PAL and your eyes are NTSC. - Will |
Author: jiggs
Posted: November 05, 2009 (11:52 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
i was just gonna put this on the HG Blog, but feel it might get greater discussion here.
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Author: overdrive (Mod)
Posted: November 05, 2009 (12:24 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
With me and time, I tend to find worth mentioning under these stipulations.
I'm not afraid to die because I am invincible |
Author: WilltheGreat
Posted: November 05, 2009 (12:36 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
I just want to say jiggs, you have the right attitude. Too many newcomers might take a critique, even from our dear Wolfqueen, the wrong way.
"Either, sir, you're an ass or masquerading as one." |
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