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Author: zippdementia
Posted: September 11, 2009 (06:40 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
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Not a bad review. You really don't need the headers (BOTTOM LINE, GAMEPLAY, FUN, etc.) to get your point across. I would remove them and just use transitions to pull these paragraphs together.
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Author: ManOWarr
Posted: September 12, 2009 (12:58 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
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I tried something different with this review by organizing sections of it, and being to-the-point. It was an experiment that I had fun with, but I'll just stick to making a straight up review from here on out. Thanks for the constructive criticism.
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