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Author: randxian
Posted: August 02, 2009 (01:59 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
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Author: zippdementia
Posted: August 02, 2009 (11:49 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
All good point, Randxian. I'm not sure I agree about the last one, though I see where you're coming from, but the first two are really observant. I actually have some issues with the intro myself, for the same reasons you mentioned, and I KNEW I left a stray personal pronoun around somewhere. Thanks for finding it.
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Author: randxian
Posted: August 03, 2009 (05:59 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
To be perfectly honest, I don't think the last "dislike" is that big of a deal. I only mentioned that because everyone kept critiquing my reviews in a similar fashion, telling me to chop unecessary words and make the writing as tight as possible.
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