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Author: zippdementia
Posted: August 01, 2009 (12:39 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Okay, my main word for this one is focus.
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Author: aschultz
Posted: August 01, 2009 (03:49 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Thanks again. I think I see how to link up a few paragraphs...the thing is, review writing does have a certain checklist, but adhering too carefully to it gets into trouble and doesn't let you express what's different about the game. You've given me a lot of good rewriting ideas and now I just need to execute.
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