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Author: Suskie
Posted: April 20, 2009 (12:16 AM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
You've obviously committed yourself to improving your reviewing skills on HG (which is great) so here's my advice for this review: You should work on making your introductions a bit snappier. The intro is one of the most critical components of any review because if you don't draw your readers in from the get-go, they're not going to stick around for the rest. The basic facts you present at the start are important, but you'd be better suited to incorporate them into the later parts of your review.
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Author: randxian
Posted: April 20, 2009 (08:25 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Hm, didn't realize my intros aren't that great. Guess it does make sense now that I look at it. Thanks for pointing that out.
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Author: Suskie
Posted: April 20, 2009 (08:38 PM) Actions: Register for a free user account to post on the forums... |
Yeah, and unfortunately I really don't have any direct advice in that regard, other than to say, again, that it's just something you'll get better with as time goes by.
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