This thread is in response to a review for Stoked on the Xbox 360. You are encouraged to view the review in a new window before reading this thread.
Posted: April 04, 2009 (07:15 AM)
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This reads much better than your original draft and is a solid review. It's cool to see you can take suggestion and work with it to improve your product. That's a really good quality for any writer to have. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Note to gamers: when someone shoots you in the face, they aren't "gay." They are "psychopathic."